Draft- possible commission for Ghost Nightclub?

I did this as a request, she's supposed to go on flyers, posters etc promoting a House club night. she's a bit wierd. But I like her!

She was a rough sketch which I scanned in and messed with using inkscape. Pretty simple, really. I've mailed her to the guy in charge and i'm just waiting to receive some feedback.
I hope to finish her completely soon...and she's only the first of four characters I'll be doing.